By: Judy

Judy — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 08:06:04 +0000

In the objective: “where promotional opportunities are available” not are achievable – or just “, with opportunity for advancement” which is probably better
Under experience: just questions, not incoming questions – what other kind are there?
On your BA – the way you state it, is ambiguous as to whether you’ve completed it. Since you say “-present”, I’m assuming you haven’t, so I’d say something like “working toward BA…” or “completion expected xxxxxxx”.
I wouldn’t put SKILLS all in caps unless I put “certificates”, experience, and education all in caps also – either way is OK but be consistent.
last line – no space in the middle of upon – and might say “References available…: rather than “*furnish reference…”
Other than those few minor things, looks pretty good.
Good luck.

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